All Comments on 'Little Miss Perfect Ch. 02'

Thanks that was one hot story .Very good job hope you write more SOON.

But needs an editor. Some words and spelling are off.

This has been great so far, can't wait for the continuation!

Moreand more please and soon

Excellent story. More please.

And extremely erotic.

So hot shy, What victorian smut did that come from..

keep it coming

5 stars from here

wilbur

So hot, Continue plz! Need to hear more, 3some maybe?

this turns me on like nothing else, im desperate for other stories with the same flavor. Doesnt have to be incest

A threesome seems inevitable!!!

quality over quantity I always say

I can see, what's it called? - come kind of menage in Paul's future

Don't keep us hanging, you need to finish this. Love your stories.

Shy you are a devilish creature with a delightfully wicked mind. Write more, any subject please need to just read you and read you. this is a good two part series that might enjoy a third part! thanks

More pwease

I need to know what happens next

Sad too see, though, that this one seems to be dicontinued...

Both stories were good but there are some spelling errors especially in the second story, you also mistakenly called Paul by the name Joe at one point. Beyond that they well written. Keep up the good work. Thanks

Ok I know that at this point it's been over 2 years, but you have to finish this story please! I'm dying to know what happens next!

It be nice to see where this is going to go!!

No chapter 3 or 4? I'd love to know, does he get to taste forbidden love with his sister. Hmm?

Of all the names there are, why did you give the female characters similar names here ? Sally and Sarah, oh please ! Following a story is often difficult when authors do this. Please, use very different names, it makes it so much easier to follow.

Thanks !

Enjoyed reading the story but what happened to chapter 1? Was it removed? Will there ever be a chapter 3?

cant find chapter 1 ;( ;(