All Comments on 'Little Red Riding Hood'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very good.

I enjoyed reading your story, it is worthy of another chapter.

daddygoesdeepdaddygoesdeepover 13 years ago
Great work

That was absolutely delicious. Another chapter soon I hope.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Rude ahole

Awww anonymous is just jealous as he has no family or friends who love him enough to read his stories awwwww! Bit of a rude assumption you made me thinks, obviusly u keep track/ notice those things because u write and obviously you had a lil tantrum cause you have no favourite rankings!!!

C_frommnC_frommnover 13 years ago
Follow-Up

Great Story it deffinately deserves another Chapter or 3

to get to the Bottom of Things and Daughter.

CorkskrewCorkskrewover 13 years ago
Very Good !

Enjoyed the writing style and would like to see more chapters added.

Well done!

oldwayneoldwayneover 13 years ago
It works for me!

It was a Five Star read. Good luck with your submission.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
You missed an opportunity

"What a big cock you have..."

"The better to fuck you with, my dear!"

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
time to start a family..

is she pregnant or will she be after they have played with each other?

xsimx87xsimx87over 13 years ago

Yep what a great story. it does deserve another chapter.

floaturboatfloaturboatover 13 years ago
Well done!

RW2,

Thanks for another great story. It works in many ways: well written, hot story and its quite seasonal!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
The open ending lets the reader to fantasize about the rest of the story

A great Halloween story and a very sweet love affair between he and his daughter.

It sure had my mind if a flurry of scenarios of what happened between the passionate couple after their first time. Especially the next morning in the light of day when they both have to admit how much they love each other, and not as father and daughter.

I do like that love was the concept for the story and just not sex, which is good but the author has brought the love between them to the forefront.

Well done and a good entry, thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very Hot

Well written - would definately like to see another chapter about her getting pregnant.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Hot

Just hot beautifully written deserves another chapter or more

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
You messed up!

I can't believe that you didn't run with the lines:

"What a big cock you have!"

"All the better to fuck you with!"

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wonderful story!

How wonderful to have so much fun with your Daddy. My Daddy is a lot of fun, too, but I really, really wish he'd fuck me, just like the big ol' bad wolf. I just love playing with my pussy and pretending it's my Daddy and your story surely did help.

hot4dadhot4dadabout 13 years ago
oh yeah

this is what we need more of here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Awesome!

Nice build up and nice level of innocence. I hate it when a lot of these stories end up with the dad calling their daughters sluts and whores. When the daughter goes from being inncent to being a whore on two paragraphs it just trashes the beauty of the moment. Awesome!

Corco763Corco763over 10 years ago
Märchenhaft!

"Rotkäppchhen und der böse Wolf", anders als bei den Brüdern Grimm, schöner und geiler.

silkman1947silkman1947almost 10 years ago
dad and daughter

dad enjoy with sexy daughter I like the story

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 6 years ago
your deck is stacked...

...with Aces!

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518about 4 years ago

Just read this again and enjoyed it’s much as before.

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