by RainierWriterII
Awww anonymous is just jealous as he has no family or friends who love him enough to read his stories awwwww! Bit of a rude assumption you made me thinks, obviusly u keep track/ notice those things because u write and obviously you had a lil tantrum cause you have no favourite rankings!!!
Great Story it deffinately deserves another Chapter or 3
to get to the Bottom of Things and Daughter.
Enjoyed the writing style and would like to see more chapters added.
Well done!
"What a big cock you have..."
"The better to fuck you with, my dear!"
is she pregnant or will she be after they have played with each other?
RW2,
Thanks for another great story. It works in many ways: well written, hot story and its quite seasonal!
A great Halloween story and a very sweet love affair between he and his daughter.
It sure had my mind if a flurry of scenarios of what happened between the passionate couple after their first time. Especially the next morning in the light of day when they both have to admit how much they love each other, and not as father and daughter.
I do like that love was the concept for the story and just not sex, which is good but the author has brought the love between them to the forefront.
Well done and a good entry, thanks
Well written - would definately like to see another chapter about her getting pregnant.
I can't believe that you didn't run with the lines:
"What a big cock you have!"
"All the better to fuck you with!"
How wonderful to have so much fun with your Daddy. My Daddy is a lot of fun, too, but I really, really wish he'd fuck me, just like the big ol' bad wolf. I just love playing with my pussy and pretending it's my Daddy and your story surely did help.
Nice build up and nice level of innocence. I hate it when a lot of these stories end up with the dad calling their daughters sluts and whores. When the daughter goes from being inncent to being a whore on two paragraphs it just trashes the beauty of the moment. Awesome!
"Rotkäppchhen und der böse Wolf", anders als bei den Brüdern Grimm, schöner und geiler.