by ZenZerker
Really well written. As is all your work. Really hope you can take these characters to and through some awesome places and times!
Just a minor correction though, masturbation is by definition self pleasure; you can't masturbate somebody else.
MORE...please!!!!
It's so hard to find incest stories dedicated to the glorious posterior. A lot of times anal is just done once and it's not even the main focus. This is a gem, keep up the good work
p.s. 5 stars
This has to be the most descriptively erotic story Ive ever read on this site. Please make it more than 2 chapters worth.
I wondered where mom was? Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.
Absolutely fabulous erotic story which had me panting and re-living memories and fantasies. LOVED it !!!
I Like This Story Very Much .. I am waiting for the next Chapter in this story .
This was the best story I have read in a while. Can't wait for chapter 2!
Great story development with lots of action as it developed. Well done!
Dude your stories are shit and your fantasies are pathetic, take that Bobby Fischer picture of your profile, you're a fucking disgrace to intellect and mindfulness and everything Bobby Fischer stands for, he has nothing to do with your animalistic, primitive cravings for fucking your own mom's and sister's asses lol.
Nice premise.
Delightfully written.
Nice and slow progression. No rush to start ass play. No rush during ass play. No rush to complete it.
Would have liked if she took his cock in hand and played with it while he was doing the massaging.
They both got naked. Would have liked some boob involvement. Would have liked her fingering herself while he played with her ass, insisting that he watch.
Would have liked more in the way of reaction while her ass was being fingered. Maybe asking for a second finger before moving on the the actual cock in ass.
Nevertheless, five stars.
This is a really good story where a brother and sister love each other and cherish themselves for each other. I'm so tired of reading how one of them loses their virginity in a fleeting affair. I would still understand if there was really deep love.
Your dynamic was very good. I like a leisurely but hot narrative, not one where a brother and sister are having sex all over the place a few paragraphs after the story begins.
Really intense on all levels needs follow up and more excitement closeness of them both
Nous sommes pour fantasmer et c'est vraiment le Cas.... Grandes écritures MERCI BEAUCOUP