All Comments on 'Living with Katrina Ch. 06'

Thanks for finally posting a new chapter. However this had very little of the Jake-Katrina relationship. Please focus more on that in the upcoming chapters

i hope you see this story heading in some direction. This chapter while really interesting seemed to deviate from the earlier chapters. Looking forward to the next chapter coming soon hopefully. All the best.

This is a wonderful complex story and I am really enjoying all the added side stories within the story! Looking forward to reading more and the complex mind of a damaged soul flows through. Well done.

I really enjoy the way the story is going. Keep up the great writing.

wouldn't mind seeing a bit more of him in his own seperat story line.

The millionaire has a familiar ring to it. Sounds a bit like the Master from your Halloween story.Be careful with that sort of thing. Unless they are the same guy... which having your albino character from that story put in a cameo here would make for an interesting twister.

Wonderful story so far. I gave you a five for this one.

M.S.Tarot

When is the next chapter goona be out ?? I check several times a day.

Hey !! Not fair. Finish this before you move on to Conscience of a soldier series

WTF is bordeaux champagne?!!! Champagne is from the Champagne region, it can only be called champagne if it's from there.

This evil f-er will be drinking The Widow (Veuve Clicquot) or perhaps Belle Epoque - except that I like Belle Epoque, or maybe the James Bond preferred tipple Dom Perignon. Or something a bit recherche. I had a Bugatti champagne once. With your appreciation of fast cars, you'd probably like that too much to let your villain have it.

I felt the financial affairs story, the introduction of the PI and the Hammer Horror evil millionaire lowered the tone somewhat. Using financial misdealings as a deus ex machina to get rid of Emma quickly is a mistake in my view. You could have had several tortuous scenes with Kat raging at her, Jake bewitched, bothered and bewildered between the two of them: boring (older?) safe colleague vs. exciting wild child.

This is like a chapter out of a different story. Instead of the intense microcosmic psychological drama between the two, could have been three with Emma, characters you were building up, you launched into an action-packed thriller cop horror combo.

No, please don't bring him here.

Conversations between J and K are the best parts. A weird thing to say on a literotica page.