All Comments on 'Lizbet's Life'

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BadGirlsLoverBadGirlsLoveralmost 12 years ago
Please Continue

Can't wait to see what Liz does next...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Hot!

The tale of Lizbet, Amber, and the bikini model screams to be told!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Too Rushed

This is well written but spoiled because you rushed it.The sex is good but could have been so much better.You fit too much into just one page it should have been so much longer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
I agree, a little rushed.

The part where Terry thinks Amber's name is "Amanda" indicates the editing could have used another pass, and the sex could have been more sensual.

Excellent set-up, though.

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