All Comments on 'Loan Shark'

The well crafted grim but smooth transition tale from haughty society lady to submissive sex slave suddenly leapfrogs into a love story typical happy ending ...

Entertained but confused,

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thought a change in ending was due after so many slave, auction, pet-girl, etc. obvious conclusions to all my stories. An amateur attempting to bend someone to their will, is almost bound t fall in love. It has to be a professional or heartless person who avoids falling in love with someone they have moulded to be what they want. Or maybe they find they didn't want an obedient partner after all. Just a thought.

I really really like this story. It's just that there weren't any hard/solid sex scenes that I think would've made it a little better or more exciting. I love the storyline, too. Hope you write something like this again because I'd really love to read it.

I liked the story..loved the idea...maybe have the man turn her out in the end at times to change things up from time to time...maybe a big black man to crack the rear end....spread the wealth around an have her open'd up to a whole new world out there...