All Comments on 'Loaned to a Friend Ch. 05'

Please..please..please stop switching between first and third person!

This is either just bad proof-reading or lazy plagiarising!

A great story ruined.

Shouldn't a wife realize that hubby does not respect or love her by making her do so many things she would not do on her own?

Good to read you again, it has been a while.

It's good to read the continuing adventures with Linda.

I still re-read your stories, often.

Thanks for continuing one of my favorite story lines. Looking forward to more.

Hi HGriffin,

Very good story but it seems to miss a "Ch. 03 Pt. 03"

In Ch. 04 : "I'd even allowed 4 of them to shove warm newly made hotdogs and sausages up my pussy and ass."

In Ch. 05 : "You mean after shoving exactly how many hot dogs up my pussy and ass?"

But by the end of "Ch. 03 Pt 02" there was no such event, only the teasing : "One quick stop back at Max's Market to pick up some steaks we ordered earlier and then we'll head home."

Jump the Shark, Oh wait you already have

"(!)"

Great story hope to see the next installment soon

When will we be able to read next chapter?

This story is so much better without sausages or drugs.