All Comments on 'Lonely Hearts'

Really looking forward to the next chapter.

Very erotic beginning, look forward to chapter 2.

AS ALL GOOD WRITERS YOU WRITE TO SLOW... LOL....MORE PLEASE

I enjoyed reading the beginning of this good series.

Thanks

it got way to unrealistic toward the end of page two. when she left to go to her room he would have also gone to his even though she told him to stay. when she came back with the viberator and said she was going to masterbate he would have got up and gone to his room and started to look for a place to live. way to unrealistic and rushed.

even though he seems a bit immature for a guy in his 50s

let's hope he joins in with the agenda his sister is suggesting

To long, too boring

I want to start off by saying that i am Not criticizing this chapter or the writing in any way. I think it is very good. But i am a bit confused as to why this chapter is in the "incest" category. No sexual contact occurred. And some readers saw this as boring. I, at one point, was thinking that the recount john was giving of the Barb incident was a waste of text. But this is 2 mature siblings trying to get comfortable around each other under new circumstances, needs and emotions. Plus, i thought the Barb story was funny. The build up is great and the dialogue realistic.