by Texican1830
And the great story continues! I'm going to hate seeing this yarn end so relaxing the schedule a bit is ok my me! Just try not to delay it so long I have to go back and reread previous chapters!
Happy holidays and enjoy the family. I can wait until next year to bring this tale to a close. As if I had any choice! 😉😂
Cheers
SAGE
While I am grateful for the shorter segments, your damn writing is so good it just makes me want more. I must say this series is another creation that is among the best on this site.
Thank you for this one. Consuming this tale produced another Outstanding Read ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ rating from me. I am looking forward to your future productions for our consumption.
Keep Writing
JH4Fun
Merry Christmas. Thanks for the post. The story is progressing well and has been fun to read. Looking forward to the next installment.
Great add to the series. This a great series, probably your best to date. Whatever you do, keep the story cadence up until its logical conclusion. “Comeuppance” left me feeling like I got dropped off a cliff in the last chapter. Merry Christmas and thank you for a year of great entertainment. 4.8*
If I wasn't almost blind, I'd read these stories rather than listen to them with my Text Aloud reader. You just gotta have those dot dot dots instead of a comma, sad, can't call it lazy but when I held the helm as Editor in Chief, I always told the Authors that it is left to the dedicated reader when to pause just like the periods and commas. Sure nice to listen to a story not filled with dot dot dots or have to edit them all out. STILL, I'll give this one 5 stars but not from this point on.
Randog, I apologize! That never crossed my mind! My widowed grandmother lost her vision in her early sixties, so I read to her a lot when I was a teen. I’m not without understanding, and I’ll be more mindful in the future.
I am surprised (mostly at myself I guess) to recognize the feeling that I am satisfied the story is over. I'm not saying it is, that is the author's decision. But if it ends here, I'm okay with that. If it continues, I'm okay with that. That's a first for me.
This chapter is stronger than the others. Here Mr. Texan has all the ducks in a row, all the undertow in place. He takes his story and his readers on a ride that is determined and enjoyable. Great stuff.
THANKS
The leap from model to action hero took me by surprise and I was concerned it would diminish the whole narrative. But, you have handled it very well and I look forward to Annika and Erik getting some well earned rest before settling down to raise their children. Maybe.
Great story. Thank you
Any chance for a Christmas present and get the next couple of chapters this week?
Any update on submitting the next chapter(s)? I am really enjoying this story and really hoping you plan to finish it.
I turned Ch 8 in on the 14th, so hopefully it will be out soon. Getting a knee replacement on the 22nd and have had a lot to do, but I’m about 30 pages in on Ch 9. Ch 10 will wrap things up.
Another great instalment. I was sure I'd read this when it came out but obviously didn't finish it. 5⛤
Hope things are now going well for you after the holidays and the op.