All Comments on 'Long Day'

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Harryin VA over 16 years ago

GOOD STORY

really liked it!! nice writing...sounds like one of my dads except for the sex

Tavadelphin almost 12 years ago

Short - sweet - fun

And he makes out after all -

We need more about Teresa? is she a lesbian - she did not seem unsure about sex or a virgin so what is it she did not do? LOL

Anonymousover 10 years ago

WHAT A PUTZ

BUT AT LEAST HE GOT TO FUCK HER AND SHE SOUNDED LIKE A GOOD RIDE TOO.....NEED MORE OF THIS STORY

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