All Comments on 'Long Day, Satisfying Evening'

Pretty well written, mostly believable.

My only question is how real the scenario really is, although there is no question that we would all love it to be real !

Keep writing !

Excellent content, but you should set a story aside for about a week, then go back and re-read it. You'd see several typos or misplaced phrases. This detracts a little from the content, which was (again) excellent. Here are a few examples: "take the blindfold of," " until your cock still and I've," "It doesn't take for you long to get over your shock." There are several others, just minor things.