All Comments on 'Long is the Way'

I love a little adventure in my smut!

Such a sweet loving story with an amazing setting.

Top-notch writing as always.

As soon as I saw your entry, I knew I was going to get a good story, and I certainly wasn't disappointed. Great atmosphere: you've confirmed that climbing the physical heights is not for me - I'll stick to the lower levels. I just hope they got that case of champagne at the end - they deserve it! I've always enjoyed your stories, and you have an editor who does you justice. Please keep them coming.

We use to go wild blackberry picking as a family, when my dad would stop the car and him and me would go pee in the bushes my mom would always say those are handy little things to take on a pick-nick. Your excellent story reminded me of that time :)

Great story line, well written and I love the content, you are to be commended!

Very entertaining. Thank you.

Thanks for sharing.

From my limited mountaineering experience, I would say you got it just about right. But a camp that close to an avalanche path should never happen. The storms, cold, and wind could be even worse at that altitude. I thought the two lovers might formalize their arrangement and honeymoon in Hawaii. Great story.

I've read alot of stories on this site but I have to tell you, that is without a doubt THE best i've ever read. It was well written, captivating, and believable! Well done!

is one hell of a story there. And one thing that is new. As i finished reading the last paragraph of page five i thought the story was over. It seemed like a good ending. And it was the last bit of text on the page... then i scroll down a bit and saw page 6!

Another fantastic story from MST, wonderfully written with a fantastic build up to their eventual coupling. Two great characters whose background anecdotes made them sympathetic to the reader and the stories premise gave them enough time to develop fully into coherent individuals without undue haste. Once again another of your stories for my favourites list, thank you!

A really nice story, heart-warming even despite the location.Well done :)

But the slow build-up was tremendously well construed, with emotional depth in the characters.

First class story telling.

i really enjoyed this story, a lot. the characters were well thought out and likable and the story moved along nicely. my only problem was the editing. there are a lot of spelling/grammar errors that cost a star for this contest. i will be back to read more of your stories. i hope they are as good as this one!

And even wish you could have the closeness and future together that seems possible for the two characters but this after all is fiction so that kind of future for the reader is unlikely. Too bad. This a very well written play and not an all too common wham bam tale of tail.

I am a big fan of your stories....Keep up the good work!

There are so much unnecessary angst and emotional baggage. Honestly, who cares about the dead spouses.

Really loving reading all of your work but definitely need to check not only grammar but LOTS of incomplete words leaving us to have to mentally full in the letters to keep moving. Keep up the great writing and if you need an editor or two there are plenty available.

I loved it. It was a nice story with a little bit of everything. It would be nice to know what happened to them over the next few years.

Truly a romantic story, brilliantly narrated. What struck me is that James and Jan were obviously in love with each other from a very early age even though they both failed to recognise it.

The story line was great and really was a story rather than a quick intro and then straight into sex. Loved it.

I really hope a sequel makes an appearance, the story has miles to run with possible further adventures for James and Jan.

5 star.....

Dreams do come true

Heart Strings was a great story, and it's somehow the least excellent story I've read from you. I don't know how you do it, but I'd be happy if I could write half so well.

There were many aspects of this story that just resonated. It got hard to take a couple of times (not in a bad way) the slow build was perfect.

Would like to hear more adventures of this couple!

Great story, well written. One thing I can't buy. In the middle of their first intercourse, when he is on top, he stops because of a pain in the leg. Not too likely, at that point if the leg had fallen off, he would have completed the mission. Come hell or high water.

Thank you for another great story. I love how you always bring us well fleshed out characters and interesting story lines. In future, I hope you will fully respect native cultures. Denali is, and has always been for Alaskan natives, the name of the mountain. No need to even mention the name previously foisted upon the land by the murderous people who have destroyed so much of the beauty here.

Thank you!

I began to read this story not sure what to expect. Half way down the first page I was gone. In to the story, reading each line, searching for what was said as well as what was not. This is the kind of story that my mind absorbs it self into. Everything else drifts away. Time seems to pause, and I relax and let my eyes move from word to word. Going to and fro with each change of direction that the story take. Waiting for the next important point that shows the way along where the story is taking me. I truly enjoyed this read. At the end I had hoped for more about these two. But what you gave was enough, it was satisfying and I was sated . Thank you for writing in such a way as to actually drag me up the side of a mountain with two cousins who come to realize that sometimes love pays no attention to family lineage.

Oh my. This was a wonderful, emotional, erotic story. This was my first story of yours that I’ve read. I look forward to reading more of them.

The trek up the mountain was so realistic!

i love your stories and the buildup. hearing how they came to falling in love and the incredible sex. keep writing. i love it

This was a really good story. Thank you for writing and sharing it.