All Comments on 'Long Weekend'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Definitely a second chapter needed.... please??

Such a delightful change in Marlene.....

Perhaps chapter 2 would find her sneaking back in an hour later, and riding him to her quiet but energetic climax......then both of them being surprised by her Mom sneaking in from behind, pushing Marlene up to have her puss eaten while Mum relives her teenage days by riding him just as vigorously..... so many other possibilities....could be a 3 or even 4 part series!!

Keep up the delicious prose, Sir!!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

There's so many of these - are there any in which the girl DOESN'T become just so.excited that she's enthusiastically pushing back and such? Because I'm sick of the same thing and in particular sick of that thing, I've stopped reading the moment that starts happening but it seems like it's every time - is there ONE without that?

I hate it lol. I hate that same cliche over and over and over.

Just ONE? EVEN FUCKING ONE?!

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