All Comments on 'Looking Back'

Story is very erotic for a son to read. While nothing like this ever happen to me, nor did I ever consider it, the fantasy is erotic. I do have some difficulty with some of the vocabulary, being American, and not being familiar with "The Kings English". With the help of my desktop dictionary, I am able to surmise the meaning most of the unknown terms in your stories.

A beautiful story beautifully told, it's so well told you have your reader seemingly involved in the action, I particularly enjoyed it when you mentioned her smell & taste, realizing all we females smell similar, some stronger some weaker, as no doubt you can smell our sexual activity in the bed room,

enough said about that. But many thanks for sharing your stories

Jemma

the only real love is between a mother and son or father and daughter.....