All Comments on 'Loosening Up Bk. 01 Ch. 16-20'

This series is SO hot, and SO erotic.,. I can't wait for the next installment(s) to see where the story goes...

Great story. You had a slight slip into the first person in the story. Felt like you had once written this story in the first person tense and then changed it but that edit fell through the cracks.

So many openings and posibilities, love it!

Well written too 👍🏼🙂

Great chapter, except for the beginning. How out of character for both Alice and Dave for her to simply give away something as precious as her anal virginity to a fuck buddy. One would think there would at least be a private conversation or an objection before just jumping into that act with Sean. Made me sad for and angry at both characters.

Fucking her boss who wasnt part of their group ? How could you be ok with that ? Fucking around outside your special interest group where everybody is in the knowing ?

How the fuck can He be ok with that. Even if the situation where the other way around she shouldnt be ok with that either.

Than the whole stripper thing ...... Does NOBODY care about their reputation anymore ? The Husband with the slutty wife who like to strip in clubs ?

For exhibitionism they could just go to a nude beach.