All Comments on 'Loosening Up Bk. 01 Ch. 21-26'

Reading on hoping for more 😛

Loved the way the story was developing. Until you bought in the strip club and porn video. Stopped reading at that point. Not interested in anything else you bring in. Will nor read any more including the end of this chapter. Unfortunately you have ruined any interest I had in this series.

You are violating the core relationship, without which the loving marriage between Dave and Alive cannot survive. Spread the love, yes, but defend the foundation to the death.

I was rely looking forward to reading about Alice going home and getting gang banged buy everyone, her boss Owen and all the neighbors. All the girls licking out all the jizz, with David going last to reclaim her as his wife. at the end of Chapter 21

Why does it feel like Dori is that one friend that comes up with the whacky scheme but never actually does it and sits back to let others do it and potentially suffer the consequences?