All Comments on 'Loosening Up Bk. 02 Ch. 15-20'

by SteveWallace

Sort by:

Newest First Oldest First

2 Comments

tizwicky almost 6 years ago

This Just Keeps Getting Better and Better

Excellent writing!

Rhino77PIlot 12 months ago

I have read a good chunk of Steve's work and a fair amount of other authors on Lit. So far, this is by far the best I have read here. The plot is well planned, the characters developed well, the story arc has enough twists to keep it interesting, and the writing is smooth and pleasing -- almost as good as the sex described. ;->

Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ

Post as:

Anonymous

SteveWallace@SteveWallace

437 Stories

3476 Followers

A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...

Live Webcams 348 Online!