by windwriter
bit it lost it with the sex -- it was simply not erotic. And you need an editor; you meant "beck and call", not "beckon call".
Thank you for your not so kind response. The misspelled "bit" for "but", at the beginning of your comment, did bring me a slight chuckle. I do enjoy constructive criticism, and I do stand corrected because of the following website information on 'Common Errors in English'. However, the information from m-w.com was what I used and trusted. If you go to m-w.com (Merriam-Webster) online dictionary you will find the information I used while writing, which I have copied and pasted below.
http://www.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/beckon.html
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(From m-w.com)
Main Entry: beck·on
Pronunciation: 'be-k&n
Function: verb
Inflected Form(s): beck·oned; beck·on·ing
Etymology: Middle English beknen, from Old English bIecnan, from bEacen sign -- more at BEACON
intransitive verb
1 : to summon or signal typically with a wave or nod
2 : to appear inviting : ATTRACT <the frontier beckons>
transitive verb : to beckon to
- beckon noun
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Main Entry: beck
Pronunciation: 'bek
Function: noun
Etymology: Middle English bek, from Old Norse bekkr; akin to Old English bæc brook, Old High German bah, Lithuanian begti to flee -- more at PHOBIA
British : CREEK 2