All Comments on 'Losing and Winning'

by lmnop321

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WMDeanWMDeanover 14 years ago
That was great

I thought it was great how your characters bonded gradually leading up to the last scene with all the different interactions they had before having sex. The storyline of how their relationship comes out of something sad is more believable and meaningful that way. Great job man.

latino_loverlatino_loverover 13 years ago
lovely story

steaming surprins sex scenes (loved the first one, and the last one) and a romantic ending...good job, would love to see more stories like this, keep up the GREAT work!!!

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