All Comments on 'Losing My V Card'

So, you can attempt to bury your head in the sand, or you can fix the shit that needs fixing. I'm not the one embarrassing myself by posting sophomoric drivel. Delete criticism of your writing, but at least fix the damned problems. If you ignore the problems AND the comments ...well ...that's just simple dumb-ass-ery.

Lushes?

Congratulations! This is a great start to what could be a five-star story. It needs a little editing. But it is far from sophomoric and it certainly isn't drivel. Keep writing, never mind the flamers! BTW, I will be happy to preview your next submission and provide editorial suggestions.

All young men need to have a "Candy" in their lives.

We all need to start with a more experienced woman teaching us the basics.

My first was very experienced. I think she fucked everybody in town and was a few years older. She was a "local" in a college town. Fucked her in the drive-in and never saw her again.

Outstanding. Great read. Hope you continue with additional chapters as he gains more experience from Candy. All young men need an older experienced teacher.