by mdtchaser62
It was not without a few editing slip ups but still a very enjoyable read. I worried that you would make your leading man a selfish user but luckily you brought out his tender, romantic side before it was finished. Wish you could've continued with him in spite of your nearly 40 yr age difference.
Well told tale that I'm sure will be followed by more of the same. Good luck!
I Really Hope David finds his love of his life very soon all the best David
lots of love and kisses from Ron xxxxx n/wales