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All Comments on 'Losing My Virginity'

by DreadWriter6969

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
lay or laid

you get it wrong every time

prop69prop69over 5 years ago
What a beautiful and Perfect relationship.

Everyone gets what they need and want.

This could give the best of both .

DreadWriter6969DreadWriter6969over 5 years agoAuthor
Usage of lay/laid

I found only one instance of the use of "laid" in my story. It is correct, If you feel differently, please comment further. I do make occasional errors in usage, punctuation, or even tense, but I don't think this is one of them.,

Thanks!

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