All Comments on 'Loss and Discovery'

Loved it...

Another fairytale come to life!

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

Great fucking father/daughter story . Loved every bit although it could have been more detailed to describe her tits , nipples and ass .

there was not enough detail, descriptions were repeated. At one stage I thought you cut and pasted a whole paragraph as it was so similar to your first.

The ending, well there wasn't. You cut the reader off short, was poorly written.

The repition works for me. Clearly it is a literary device designed to illustrate the every-day habits she has, and how their context has shifted.