All Comments on 'Lost'

Don't know where you got the idea for this story from, but bring on more! Fuck! That was hot!

i can show you where the idea came from if you send me an email address.

hot! hot! hot! they need to do it again! and again!

I would like details on where the story came from, too. I love the thought of brother and sister sharing their bodies with each other. I am still waiting on the final chapter of the series Katy's Smell. The 6 chapters are a great read so far. Hopefully your next chapter will expand on their love beyond their initial lustful encounter. Lust and love makes the sex even better. Maybe they will wake up each morning as horny as the night before.

GA is an amazingly prolific author, and his hallmark is beautifully written stories, such as this one. I think that sibling fucking is much more common than a straitlaced puritanical society and especially scared parents care to hear about.But it usually occurs between teenagers and youngsters in their early 20s. With Simon and Caroline we have latecomers to the game, but perhaps all the lustier for it. I love how frank they are about lusting for what each one has between their legs. Simon just cannot get enough of Caroline's sisterly snatch, she can't get enough of what she calls her brother's "fat cock." They rut like animals, making up for lost time. It is one hot incestuous fuck and they glory in the fact that they are "committing" (silly word, they're performing) "incest." She shrugs and says, "I don't care what it's labelled – so what?"--a surprisingly up-to-date attitude that much younger siblings have nowadays. They lay and get laid, no big deal, and if it's with someone they're fond of or even love--like their brother or their sister--all the more reason to have some great dirty family fun. A boy's in awe when his sis cums like crazy on his young cock. A girl loves it when her bro blows his brotherly balls way up inside her tight little twat. Here's to Simon and Caroline, long may they enjoy their family fucks, and to the gifted author who brought us their story.

There won't be one that's what GA does. Leaves you hanging, waiting.

Sister brother sex is more common and natural then we think. How doess a young healthy male brother, resist a gorgeous young sister, walking around in her underwear.? Not so easy to resist eating that wet beaver, and the giving her a good fuck. We all should be so lucky.

loved the initial denial, then the full acceptance--with the invitation for much more. 5*

Great story and very naughty between sister and brother and that is what made it so great, you have to write more please. She can teach him to enjoy sex more and get everything out of it and share it together. Thanks.

Brother..sister incest does seem to occur more but also does cousins....

These feelings just happen..very hard to control when a relative lives that u and is comfortable around u walking around in minimum amount of clothing or underwear..;-)

A another chapter would definitely peek my interest. .xx thank u (female)

That true, GA?

Sucks (& you too) if so...

I rarely see a story about brother-sister incest where they're not younger than these two. I'm 67 and I still hanker for my little sister who's 58. Nothing can ever happen or has ever happened between us, but the thought of it and the fantasies continue since I first thought of her in this way more than forty years ago. This story puts a real face on incest and I enjoyed it very much. Thanks, too, for a story I could read without stumbling through poor grammar and misspelled words. As for Anonymous' 'fancy' comment, the story didn't peek your interest - it 'piqued' your interest or possibly 'peaked' your interest. Sorry to include this here but these things bother me.

What a well written story, very nicely done

does it say Chapter 1 in the title? if not, then the story stands alone. i get the occasional email asking if i'm going to add further chapters to submissions; my usual response is i'm usually bust with something, but will bear it in mind and add something if the mood strikes.

usually, it doesn't, but never say never.

Appreciate the mature angle. I get tired of the just turned 18 genre. 5 stars for sure. Would love to see Simon's 60ish mom drop in for a visit while Carolines out of town.

Perfect pacing, nice deft touch on the characterizations, and excellent saucy sex! Excellent story overall, and it ends at the perfect moment. A second chapter would just be gilding the lily.

Sex is filthy and degrading, but only if it's done right. This is done right.

Very good story. I kept asking, so when are they going to fuck? I only had a little trouble with it. Google Translate doesn't do British to American. :-)

Everytime I read "croaked" it made me think "are these frogs I'm reading about?"

I mean, I don't believe I've ever talked in a way that would be considered croaking.

Couldn't get through the first page. A couple of 18 y/o would have been more mature about it. 1*