All Comments on 'Lost and Forgotten Ch. 03'

Brilliant

This is real good. Can not wait for more

That is a very good story .Anyone reading for first time should start with chapter 1. You get caught up and forget it's not real . Lost Boy is a master story teller cant wait to see where he takes this one . On the scale of 1-10 this is a 12 . Thank you, Great job .

I have to say it is not what one usually thinks of when you think of an incestual story or even a sex story! It raps your mind around what John faces next and not only who he will come in hormonal contact with but where it will happen. The first incest story you can't help but wonder if it would not make a really perfect movie with sequels to tell the whole story. The three stories up to this point would end at the window wondering what it was and leave you waiting to see the next segment (movie). Great job and can't wait for the next installment!

great can't wait to read what happens next keep it up.

Another great chapter love reading your stories and eagerly awaiting what you have in store for John next.

You are a very talented writer, your previous stories have been very entertaining, however this storyline has kept me on the edge of my seat. Please, please hurry in posting these chapters as the wait to read more of this story is killing me.

im not kidding. I ploughed through all 3 chapters (like john ploughed jynx) I am an avid reader of sci-fi fantasy horror history and erotica, so when I say this story captivated me, it had to be REAL good. when this showed up in my search I thought ill give it a shot. I am so happy I did. from the very beginning I thought this is something that could be published in hardcopy and sold in the book shop, its so great. I loved the whole lovecraft lore you incorporated into the story. I found myself saying " no don't go in that hole". please I am desperately waiting the next installment, please say you will write more. cant say enough about your talent

The story is great but it still irks me that a man from Ukraine speaks his native language Polish because those two languages are not that similar in speaking terms