by Hubs_in_hose
It would be nice to think there might be more to come. Very well done - five stars and my thanks for a hot and sexy tale.
Thank you for you comments and your vote. I appreciate all feedback.
At points it wandered and once or twice the grammar slipped from very good to average but it was interesting, fresh and didn't bore me.
I have to agree with a previous commentor. It was very imaginative and I haven't read anything like it here. Good job Hubs and good luck in the contest. :)
slightly menacing at first wasn't sure I would enjoy it but it hooked me in ended great so well done.
This was my first ever entry in a contest on Literotica. I greatly appreciate the votes, comments, and the fav's. If you have an opportunity, check out my other works. There will be more chapters in A New Mind shortly.