All Comments on 'Lost Empire Ch. 08'

connor begging? shelby always crying? for fucks sake they are supposed to be military grown, experianced (shelby active for centuries) AI not kids...

as an ex army ranger i can tell you that even military people cry at times, so do not let that anonymous comment concern you, and since the A I ship aka Shelby has some of her personality growing and a female yeah she could cry over a loved one....again Good job

Amazing story. I am torn between wanting longer posts, with much longer time periods between posts, and more frequent but shorter ones. I have been checking constantly for new updates so shorter and more frequently won out.

Being elderly I well remember the thrill of reading my favorite authors of the golden age of science fiction, it's so nice to feel a bit of the same thrill once again. And please, don't change anything about the AI's, they are perfect just as they are. I can't wait for the next installment!

Very well thought out, written, and presented..

I was getting ready to send a complaint to Lit about screwing up and not posting the next chapter. You had spoiled us with daily updates and then two dates with out. One of the other series I follow was not posted on the regular intervals and was posted today too.

I first want to say this is a great story and that you should be very proud of it. But with that being said you could use an over all edit when it is down. There are some areas of the story that conflict with each other. Like Derrick havING no clue about his past then stating that he always wonder if it was possible. And a few others about the ship and the outside world you are making. Just my thought feel free to tell me to piss off. Thanks again for the story look forward to more.

Awesome story - Please keep going!

This story is awesome. I have been reading it on the other sites where you posted it and looks like almost finished with it.

As was pointed out to me by one my readers, apparently it's actually 'per se'.... yeah, I know, anal retentivenes is a hobby...

Great story so far, liking the interplay between the main and the AI's. Thanks for your efforts.

Rereading your story for the second time I absolutely love it I hope you will consider having this story properly published as I would love to buy them to add to my science fiction collection of novels, PS please consider writing more chapters from where these leave off as I would definitely like to continue to read Derrick and Shelby's storyline

Hi, Pars! It's just me, your friendly neighborhood binge reader passing through, again. Still loving it, just FYI.