All Comments on 'Lost Empire Ch. 11'

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arrowglass almost 7 years ago

Breadcrumbs...but still addicting!

Short chapters on a riveting story...like breadcrumbs...but I am still a fan. MORE please!

rightbank almost 7 years ago

I realize the writer sets the rules

Especially in alternative universes.

But these are s tad extraordinary

Anonymousalmost 4 years ago

I recommend a rewrite

This story is so good in so many ways, but please, learn a bit about space and apply these corrections. I don't think "galaxy" means what you think it means. ;-) Time and distance scales stretch the laws of physics too far....

Purplefizz about 1 year ago

Really, President of an entire rebel republic (where have we heard that before?) and he pisses himself when stressed? About as credible as a “Galaxy killing bomb” - I bet it’s round and black and has “Bomb” written in white letters on it, made by Acme no doubt too. FFS.

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