All Comments on 'Lost Empire Ch. 17'

a couple of days to catch up, well worth it. Great read. Would be better with an editor to clean it up. But, great story line. thanks for sharing.

with anonymous

Please understand that those that criticize are the few that mostly criticize anyone that does not follow their ideas. To state that the story is “improbable, unbelievable and not entertaining” clearly shows the individual just wants to hurt, discourage and insult. A possible college graduate that believes his/her opinion does not require acknowledging the facts. As I have stated before, let the votes be the measure of your success. The facts are that: The story is under the heading of Science Fiction and most readers’ votes are high! Keep up the great work.

Hi,

I have read couple of stories here on Literotica and in other sites this is one of the best I can say.and in the pace you deliver the story is outstanding keep the good work

Thanks for this story .

Enjoy

Great read - please keep going! Can't wait to see how it turns out.

I can't read anymore, it has great promise but it seems the writer tries to set the story back as much as possible, everything seems to go wrong and it really needs editing.