All Comments on 'Lost Empire Ch. 25'

I like the plot but its becoming harder to follow everything thats going on as you move at such a fast pace, you may want to consider slowing your scenes down slightly to go into greater detail. Good work with the progress you've made, keep it up!

I absolutely love this series. That said, there is one Grammer bug that repeatedly throws me off. You use "his self" when you should be using "himself". I mean this only as constructive criticism. I myself could never write such a captivating story. Thank you for the entertainment!