All Comments on 'Lost Empire Ch. 52'

Pars...glad to see you back to this story. All your storm damage repaired?

i am so glad to see this story back, while your latest has been really good this is still my favorite so far, and can never get enough of it. Thank you for coming back to it.

thank you for coming back to it, you have the touch reminiscent of Niven or Asimov, maybe even a touch of Heinlein or Farmer. Very pleasant and easy to read, while flowing along and not acting like a 13 year old in heat.

thank you very much,

Glad to see your writing again. I thought this series was dead. It has been one on my favorites

keep up the good work...

I enjoy your works and was wondering when you would return to this story. I read all of your stories and I have been looking forward to you returning to this one. Please continue this one.

First, I Love This Story!! And all the others here! Thank You! Second, in your list of ships, isn't Thomas the prime for Connor? You don't have him listed.

DJ

So I take it you are lost what to do with this story, ehh Pars?? You did one chapter after over a month, just to calm people down. This chapter is about the dullest one I've seen yet in this story, and it shows you were straining to come up with something. Meanwhile you are cranking out new chapters every other day on your new story. Maybe you should re-read what you've written of this one so far so you can see. You had it going in a certain direction, and you haven't gotten there yet. So it isn't hard to figure out what you were going to get to eventually. Or at least the proximity. There is a lot there yet to write. Or did you just lose the whole plot by not writing for so long?? It's why you need to go back and read the whole thing. Takes hours and days to do it, but maybe it would get you back on track?? Should have kept at least a journal of the story and all the plots and side plots. I'd suggest you make that on a re-read. You can't make a story this huge without keeping these notes and knowing far ahead how it's going to play out.

Hell I'm afraid once you get going again, many people are going to have to back up 20 chapters just to figure out what is going on. I almost did, but you really didn't advance the story too much in the last 2 chapters. That's why people are so pissed or upset about you stopping. You have nearly killed a story that you and us readers have invested a lot of time into. You can't just let it lay like this. Same for the Genie story. If so, I'd say delete it, or I dare say, allow someone else that is a good writer to pick up the story where you left off. Lost Empire is too good of an multi-novel story idea to just let it go to waste here. If you don't know how to write it, then let someone who has an interest in it do it.

And don't just throw up a crap chapter just to shut people up. Either crap or get off the pot. They might be thanking you, but they also might be thinking you are going again on it. It's obvious you are not and are just appeasing people by tossing something in there.

Thank you for your part 52.

As usual it is great!

I have no right to tell you with to do with it, but....

To kill this story after 50 parts by not finishing it, is a CRIME.