All Comments on 'Lost Empire Ch. 56'

Keep up the good work. Until next time

Lioking forward to the next installment.

When can we expect the next chapters? Also for A Guy and His....

I see you've started yet another story. Does this mean you're dropping your two favoured stories now? I sure hope not

Leaving a good story hanging and putting out others is not the best way to win fans.

Are you going to provide closure for the story or you just going to leave us hanging like it with your other stories?

Pars are you going to continue with this story line

Is this the end?

Has the empire been left in limbo whilst sex robots and cat people take over the galaxy?

Will Shelby ever get to know the Loving touch and start producing heirs?

Enquiring minds want to know.

Well I've officially stopped reading your stories as you cannot finish them.

This one and AGaH... are good but unfinished and I'm not setting myself up for disappointment from you yet again.

TK

Enjoy your writing and

It’s impressed with your story telling and have enjoyed many hours following

Lost Empire. One issue that could improve is the use of the word “smirk.” I think if you research the actual definition you will replace it in many of your descriptive passages.

Keep the stories coming and thank you.