by Pars001
Damn good as always.
One thing I hate about the story is it only comes out once a month.
Five stars as always .
I've probably said this before, but I really hope you consider getting this published.
I really enjoy this story line. And In fact all your storylines. Keep writing brother.
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Pars died. He said fuck it, and he died before finishing the rest of the stories. Or maybe he is faking his death, so he doesn't have to write? Time will only tell.
Why does the noble randomly switch between being a Baron and a Duke?
Why us the Shelby AI going out to the outer rim? She is the only one that can regen the new brain boxes. They should send someone else and keep her safe.
Yup lucie is the worst “I hate you zan I wish you were dead” then “OMG NOOO WHY DID HE SACRIFICE HIMSELF I DONT UNDERSTAND”.
Like lady this ship watched his wing mate die…again…and you were upset cuz you felt like she was your friend. That’s like being pissed at your friends husband cuz she killed herwelf and he just would “never understand what it’s like to lose a friend”….except his wife literally died and you’re acting like your feelings are more important.
Please just stick her to a thermite bomb and launch her into transwarp