All Comments on 'Lost Empire Ch. 65'

I have been looking for more on this story thread for some time.

So glad to see you continue and as always the writing is

Superb!

Taking to long for new chapters but good luck

Great series i just wish you would put out chapters faster since there just 2 pages

Thank you for coming back to this series, i know its probably hard to keep the time and ideas flowing but i love reading every chapter.

Great story hope to see more very soon.

hasn't anyone else gotten totally bored with this long winded story? Just finish it. Are you after an award for the longest story ever? dull

If you dont like the story then dont read it.

That being said, Pars, I find the story delightful and am only disappointed in the fact that this chapter has taken so long to post. Please continue as I want to read more. And dont listen to Mr. Negative there.

Dude, you really should get this published! All flattery aside, this is at the same level as Robert Jordan, David Eddings, even the legendary Fritz Bieber. Please at least think about it won't you?

I am really enjoying the addition of the Tendrax females and the complications they add to the story. I am looking forward to seeing where you are going with this. Thank you for improving my day with your posting. Lost Empire is one of my favorite sagas on Lit.