All Comments on 'Lost Empire Ch. 77'

Still 5 stars. as usual. That said; there are a log of typo style errors, and a few missing words which make the story harder to keep suspending reality while reading. When I have to stop and figure out what your meant to say, or which word is missing it is a brain fart kind of moment.

Thank you for at least another small glimpse. It's been to long between chapters. Glad you are back. '

David

This story seems to have lost a lot of direction and momentum over the last few chapters. I'm losing interest.

I have given this story 5-stars for each chapter. This is the best sci-fi story in this section. Who says you have to have sex to make a story interesting? I always wondered how parsec was going to finally end this story. Will it be with Shelby giving birth to an heir? Will all the main characters survive or who will die? Only the Shadow(Parsec) knows. Ward Master

Such an excellent story! Unfortunately, it appears to be headed to the bone pile of orphaned stories. Sad indeed.

Lost in Space. This started out interesting but has become redundant. I fear you have lost focus and the drift is becoming obvious. End the thing if you can, it has become boring.