All Comments on 'Lost Empire Ch. 84'

Great Story. Just wish it didn't so long between chapters to be released to us. I'll be dead before you finish the story.

Good to see you back at it.

Thankyou. Much appreciated.

Wow. Risen is a bigger fiend than I thought! Great plot twist, Pars001! This is one hell of a universe you've created. As others have said, you'd be a fool not get this published.

Just found this series/story, must say I'm impressed. Reads like an epic novel from an established author. My only complaint is the 2 page chapters; it's like having to go back to the library over and over and over again to get the next chapter of a single book. The story tho is fabulous and as in depth as anyone could ask for. Looking forward to the next installment.

Wish there was more

Risen really is a gruesome little bastard, isn't he?