All Comments on 'Lost Girl: Julie's Story Ch. 03 Pt. 01'

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belleamsbelleamsover 9 years ago
Awesome!

Thank you sooooooooo much for writing more about Julie and Mark they have always been my favourite of your characters, I loved their story.

I love this and can't wait for more :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
A wonderful story

It's great to see these characters, all of them, back again. Can't wait to see what happens - can Nia get over her worries? do Darryl and Mark really look like twins? will Julie and Lena get their boys mixed up? (Not really, they know them too well for that.) Good to see you back in top form. GT

mrdilligafmrdilligafover 9 years ago
Wow

As per usual you have the power to keep up with the stories we like. Please keep going with your brilliant writing. Why does this site only have up to 5 stars. It should be more.

dmg43dmg43over 9 years ago
AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ABOUT DAMN TIME!!!!

SO glad you're back & continuing this story.

It's so nice when one of the very few MASTERS posts a story here.

What a breath of fresh air.

I'm looking forward to the next chapters to see how it all turns out..........

Counting the days...........

dmg43

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I bow to the master your stories have kept me company many a long night. Please continue.

WordcraftWordcraftover 9 years ago
VERY NICE!

Beachbum, keep these gems coming! It is so nice to read a well written and interesting story. Thank you for hours of reading pleasure!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Can't wait for this story to continue

I love your stories and I am glad that these two are starting to find out about their family. I can't wait to see what happens with the rest of this story.

SlimRhinoSlimRhinoalmost 9 years ago
Holy tearjerker batman...

You have such a way to project strong emotions in your writing, it's amazing. That scene with Julie and mummy Anh reduced me to a sobbing wreck.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Sad, wise, uplifting, insightful

Your writing embodies all of these; please write more in this vein, your characters have heart, and wisdom, and real depth to them, please write more stories like this

goducks1goducks1about 5 years ago
i hate sounding like a broken record - but 5 stars again!

wow - a lovely tale of love, family, romance. very well told. fantastic. looking forward to the next part!

DevilbobyDevilbobyover 3 years ago

If only I could give it TEN 🌟

ScottishTexanScottishTexanalmost 3 years ago

Fuck you Beachbum! Fuck you, you no good Bastard! You fucking broke me on the last page. I cried like a girl. I'm not ashamed.

This hits me so close to home. Growing up, my family lived in another state about 200 miles away from all of the rest of my relatives. 😢 I grew up an only child because my big sister died shortly after she was born. I sought out the lack of siblings by replacing her with my cousins. I was relatively close to my two cousins on my father's side who were surrogate big brothers to me. We kind of lost touch after my parents died. But recently, my oldest cousin's wife reached out to me. I had been searching for them for almost 10 years. Your story brought all of my feelings crashing back. When you have family that loves you, it's really a blessing and a treasure.

5/5 stars 🌟. 🌟

DevilbobyDevilbobyover 2 years ago

I am rereading these stories and I find them as moving now as I did the first time. You really are a brilliant writer and I shall carry on reading as I can't remember the trail they follow to reach the ultimate conclusion. Thank you. Bob

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