All Comments on 'Lost in His Past'

I have enjoyed all of the stories you share here. If this one isn't a winner in the contest, I'll be very surprised. To say it's fantastic would be an understatement.

Thank you for sharing it.

terrible story writing, incorrect grammer, and no plot.,better try next story hopefully

Ignore anonymous. Good story, well told. Guess I need to read some of your others.

I liked the story and don't know why someone would call it terrible. Yes, there were a couple of edit slip ups, but not as many as most. The plot made it a sweet love story. (A little corny for my tastes...but...in all, well done!) I look forward to reading others by this author.

You have created a superb story,

Romantic, sensitive and loving with a few unusual twists thrown in for good measure.

Well done.

Thankyou.

Enjoyed the story - well written, romantic and sensitive.

This is a very good absorbing story and quite different from your usual style. Keep up the good work and thanks for the good reads over the years

Regards from a fan in the UK

Hi,

very deep and beautiful story!

Would love to see a part two of it!

Best wishes!

If possible, I would give you 6 stars, or as they say in the Eurovision Song Contest: "m_storyman_x twelve points!"

There's something good, or great, about stories like this.

Sure, unbridled sexual activity between two consenting adults.... not merely consenting, but expecting and wanting... together with all the conversation and verbal to and fro that leads up to, happens during, and comes again after, the sex.

That's all good.

But what makes stories like this good, or great, is the way they take it one step further and turn the unbridled sexual activity into a relationship that has more than sex going on.

Six stars, if I could. Five stars, because that's all I can.

I think this is one of your best stories. Keep it up. You have some great material! Truly enjoyed the hot passion between the characters and the interesting ending. Wanted more. Maybe you could add a part two?

That was one of the best I've read in awhile! The story drew me in and I could visualize all the characters in their surroundings, going about whatever activities they were, at the time. I like how it was structured and I also like how you were able to present the experiences of each person, for the same event. Plus, the content was excellent! Romantic, playful and rather believable. Excellent job!

Always great stories 5 stars again

One of the best stories ever written. Thank you

I don't usually respond to comments, and i rather doubt that you will return to see this response, but lets get real here. If you don't like the story, don't read it. If you dislike my story lines, find other authors to read. I am quite aware that my stories don't fit every reader, which is why i write a variety of topics, stretching my horizons. But its just plain discourteous to come into a forum, shout down an author because you in particular didn't like the work and not even have the courtesy to leave your name so that you can be contacted. It takes hours and hours of effort by both the author and editor to produce what you so frivolously cast aside as trash. In the future please have the decency to leave your name or simply go look elsewhere for stories that you enjoy more. M.

Tears falling as I mouse my words. Poignant and erotic. Ignore the insensitive begrudgers. Bob, Wicklow, Ireland.

USUALLY IN DIFFERENT SIGNS AND ACTIONS. tk u mlj lv nv

This is an excellent story. Ignore anonymous and hateful commenters.

Somewhat unrealistic, but it was definitely entertaining.

For a long time I have belved that Annoy postings should not be allowed on Lit. There is gang that hides behind that usage that seem to get their jollies by trashing a story, and author of the story on a personal level. I have found that because of the Annoy Nazi gang’s personal attacks on them several good authors have stopped posting their work on Lit.

You did it go me again, captivated me and blew me away when he spoke to his wife.

1) I suspect that "Anonymous" (the jerk with the insulting comments) was either envious of your skills or just being sarcastic.

2) Loved the story, but my feelings after he spoke with his late wife lean me to want to fall back into depression and despair... I can see how he found it reassuring and a release from his despair, too. Everyone will interpret that moment differently, but that's my reaction.

3) I realize it's been years since this story was written, but you could still write a "Part 2"...

I was here 12 years ago. Brings back strong memories. Both painful and wonderful. Thank you. Now excuse me while I go make love to my young(er) wife.

Bravo! Well done.

Awesome ending !

Another well written story with and enjoyable ending. 5*...

Thank you.