All Comments on 'Lost in Texas Ch. 02'

There Are Very Few Writers Claiming To Be Professionals That Tell A Story As Well As This.Thank You For Your Work. TomJ

This story is by far one of the best literotica submissions that I have read. You should most definetly continue with this story. The characters are so well developed, and the story is so steamy. The story line increases the heat of the sex scenes, because you can almost place yourself there. Amazing work.

I love it. :)

You've managed to find that rare, perfect balance of plot and smut. It goes together so very well! I can't wait to read the rest of this series, and I hope it continues for well into the future...

You are a total professional. I have lost so much sleep and productivity because I can't put your story down. What an excellent film this would be. Desert Hearts was great but this is super. I have 2 more installments to go before I'm caught up. I sure hope the serial never ends.

I love a good story- especially a good love story. Shhh. Don't tell anyone. You are marvelous, and I can't wait to read the rest of your submissions.

I am loving this story. I am finding that my heart really goes out to Alice, starting with at the beginning of the chapter when she was hugging her first lover, Michelle, goodbye. I hope she finds her true love! Geez, I'm such a hopeless romantic! ~ L

Most of the stories me and wife find are jump to sex stories. However, your stories are very well developed. The story line is amazing. This could be a very good book if you keep it up. Very nice we look forward to reading the rest.

And thank you again. I immensely enjoyed myself reading it. I note that you mixed up Michelle's name a couple of times with some of the other girls, that could improve. But you write so nice, life itself developes in front of your readers.

% stars again.

My errata ( this is incomplete this time..)

no loss of memory of cognitive ability. => second of should be or

Heather was slightly distracted by =>Should be Michelle

Going to be early and

Yeah just dramatic events turnings happenigs must appear to let you s realize the reality ...... We are walking down the path of life and loosing the awareness of the moment for all of our surroundings ...... Then a worst case happen and its mostly late to late for changings ..... So yes for our souls health we should learn being aware of the here and now