All Comments on 'Lost in Texas Ch. 04'

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PoutineFanPoutineFanover 19 years ago
Amazing. Simply amazing.

My god... I've been visiting this site for a few years now, and in all that time, I've never come across a story that I've loved this much. I really wish there was a printer-friendly option, because if there was, I'd print off the entire series without hesitation.

Great work, and I can't wait to see what comes next!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
no good with liz

It'snot okay wit Liz with Alice. I wish Heather with Alice. It's making hot sex

CrapolaCrapolaover 19 years ago
It's making good sex!

No matter who's with whom.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Applause all round!

i just finsished reading the whol story chapter 1-4. It was amazing, had everything you could poss need in an erotic/romantic story. I can't wait to read some more of your work.

There were only some minor technical errors like incorrect names when refering to the characters, and also some grammatical errors. Nothing that stopped the flow of the story though!

Again, Fucking fantastic!

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 15 years ago
I Cried when they made up

This an epic tale, I LOVE IT SO MUCH

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Can't Get Over.....

This story. I wish it could be published! Thank you for writing it.

josseerikajosseerikaover 10 years ago
Movie!

I would love for this story to be made into a movie! It would be the best movie ever!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great drama!

Still not keen on the dom/sub theme which to me seems more about humiliation than pleasure. But it was only a small part of this chapter. The real strength was the great drama play between Heather and Laurie. I know they're only fictional characters but I was really worried for them, and I guess that's a sign of good plotting and writing. I've just one more chapter to go and right now, that doesn't feel like it's enough for this excellent story.

Cindy1001Cindy1001over 8 years ago
Bad girl!

You are so bad, bringing tears to my eyes. I was so carried away. This is one of the sweetest stories I know, although with flavour and spices.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 2 years ago

Ten hearts 💝💝💝💝💝💖💖💖💖💖 ....... Was it lying or being afraid discrediting a beloved one ...... So its a small gap in between to do the right the perfect the best and as always its about decisions ........ Breathtaking

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

More brilliance lots of story and good sex, must get on to the next part

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