All Comments on 'Lost in the Woods'

by Westless99

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Seriously....

Quick little jerk off, not even a twitch, meant for males surely

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
male call

Yep, by a man, for men.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4ualmost 8 years ago

What I liked was the last line

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Re-Post in Non-Erotic

(The maybe see about finishing high school)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Hurried

Seemed rushed. I would think that the story was written by a guy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
this is basic

Your story lacks character development, plot and could use more description. Additionally by repeatedly using short declarative sentences you give the story a choppy flow.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Delicious

I see my 62 year old science teacher Mrs East and lick out her bushy ginger cunt, she screams as she squirts, I love seeing her massive saggy tits wobble! don't worry I get the same in return lol

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