All Comments on 'Lost In Translation'

Short and sweet. Thanks.

Clever. Well done story. Believable. Thailand. What a culture!

Loved it. Great short story. And yeah, the censors need censoring

If you spent any time in SEA during the 60s 70s you can figure out what that means. Good story, If not try google .. second urban dictionary definition. 5s

Short and sweet. Loved it!

When did they marry?

The rest of it is somewhat juvenile so I wonder if indeed you are 18 or over.

For the read.

Very bad English

Trying to pretend that people are over 18 after writing the story just adds so many contradictions and inconsistencies that the story just becomes garbled rubbish.

Good read, could use some more refining, but overall works.

Also so glad to see new works from you it's been a while.

Tanhors and family.

If you've submitted a story and had it rejected and wanted to communicate with the rejectors, and found a better way to do it other than to put the communication in the story itself, let me know. The same thing happened with A New Dawn Ch. 1 when somebody pulled it down after its having been up for years.

Nobody's trying to pretend anything. Some readers/editors just aren't comprehending everything they read.

Great little snipit! Hope some part of it is true. 😉

AAH, short and sweet!

Regarding your in-story comments:

My submitted story subject (Incest/taboo): -

"Mature man scores with niece's babysitter."

Rejected for rewrite to ensure all participants are over 18 (or similar words.)

Resubmission with Comment:-

"Babysitter in story is niece's mother. Want confirmation, then READ it."

I suspect submissions are not read! With the probable high numbers submitted, each story is analysed by computer programs, set to trigger red flags for what it is set to find.

Hence no "Comprehension" is applied.

Short, but sweet.

Loved it. Sometimes a short and sharp story is what you want, and it's hard not to enjoy a story where the narrator is not in full possession of the details of the story.

Very compact and riveting. Once you launch into it, you cannot go back before the end. Excellent. 5*

BJ

Short but hot!

Short, but sweet. Good job.

Editors are perpetually worried about birth dates, but rape the ever loving shit out of a woman, against her will, as violently as you like, as long as she has a tiny little orgasm by the end of it, and THAT is perfectly fine. Really fucked up editing standards here.

Part 2...............

Wow a great quickie. This was very good and the writing is great. You really threw in a twist with the language aspect, which I thought was brilliant. Thanks again for writing it's much appreciated 😊👍

Another 5 star shorty.

Bill S.

EXTEND this story!

Great quickie! Wonderful imagination.