All Comments on 'Lost Job Pt. 01'

Awesome start. Strong, yet subservient.

Loved it. Cannot wait for part 2.

Very intriguing start Joe, I'm looking forward to subsequent chapters

Lots more of this series please

Write longer stories with more content instead of single page teasers.

To the anonymous commenter who wants to dictate what I write, there are plenty of writers who write much longer pieces, some 12 or more pages long. If that is what you insist on, read those.

I tend to write shorter pieces and sometimes with multiple parts. Part 2 of this story is in the works, but had been delayed due to other priorities.

Interesting start.

To the demanding Anon - that’s a pretty damn rude approach to take!?

Tess (uk)

well written super teaser