All Comments on 'Lost on a Hike'

Nice follow up.

Try to ignore negative comments, just keep writing what you feel.

Appreciate the positive, delete the negative.

I like your writing style, and love your genre, but would like to see longer chapters.

Thanks, keep writing for us please.

Hope this story continues. Also hope that Laura and Tori only have sex with each other and not Derek. Far too few strictly lesbian incest stories out there so I hope this one stays only lesbian. One more thing I would not mind seeing happen would be anal included in Tori and Laura’s sex play. Keep up the great work and hope the next chapter gets posted soon.

I would like to also cast my vote for keeping this story strictly lesbian. Or at least keep all of Laura’s sex only with her step sister Tori and no one else. I love the idea of innocent Laura only experiencing Tori. I also think anal would be a nice touch. Perhaps Laura finds out she really likes it when Tori sticks things up her butt.

Your shower story made me want more. Thanks!

Keep it lesbians it's hotter

Strictly lesbian would be so awesome *.* (and anal included would cool too) your stories are amazing, keep it up :D And thanks for posting something so awesome :3

I would find this much more appealing with some build up (seduction). As it is, they jump into sex much too fast for it to seem remotely believable, especially when one is supposed to be an innocent virgin.

Great story! I wasn't aware of this being a follow up to your last one. But it worked together great. Hope so read ALOT MORE from you. Please let me know when you have another one 4SURE