All Comments on 'Lost Underwear'

and a bit to big jumps. kind of hard to get into the story, leaving out a lot of details how it came so far.

Even after I read the story, I didn't know what I read. It was very hard to get much out of it.

I liked it. Good story line and kept my interest. Felt sorry for he girl but that's the point of the story.

This is an abbreviation of an old story, told from the other point of view, IIRC the original was 4 pages and better told.