All Comments on 'Louise Ch. 02'

loved this chapter i can not wait to see Louise reaction when she finds out about them being vampires very cool story can not wait for more

The Sinclaires are an interesting family but thier lives are exciting so its nice to see Nathan and Louise getting a chance at a normal courtship. Mind you lassie i dont trust ye no tae hiv a few twists and turns lined up for them.

I loved it I can't wait to see what happens between Nathan and Louise. Please continue writing this wonderful story.

I can now move my stalkermobile over to JUSTINE! Thanks for the update Kal, loving getting to know Louise and Nathan. Are we going to have to deal with Gene&co again? Whatever you have in store I will enjoy the journey!7AB

It so much!!! Nathan and Louise will be a great couple can't wait til she starts being a little less shy.

Thx Kal for the update. Can't wait for the next installment. A real nice challenge for Nathan to make Louise his. I wonder how the road to making her his will be. Keep them twist coming...

I truly do enjoy the Sinclair family... I cant wait until the next update...

I was fixn to wonder if you were ok!! cuz u always update us on the family we cant get enough of!! love the update on whats going on with lou. and nathan.. I cant wait for u to keep update us on the family!! I cant wait to read the next chapter about justine the queen of the vampires and her finding her ma! ur work is wonderful and ur a great not wonderful writer and i hope u never stop cuz u will alway have a reader(me :).

I enjoy the way you weave the tale from Louise's perspective. Excellent job. I would have liked to see more when she connected with Bradford before he died. Her empathy is fascinating. Well done. Kal! :)

Nathan is highly protective of her too...

Thank you,

M1

As always, another great update. Lou and Nate make a charming couple.

This is starting out to be another great read by one of my favorite authors.

Every story that you put out is well written and keeps a person's interest. Louise and Nathan are starting out smoother than any of the othe Sinclair Love stories, but I have a feeling that there is conflict ahead that is going to be resolved with a happy ending.

You're always my first read on this site. Keep 'em coming!

I really enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to the next one.

It will be interesting to read how Nathan draws Louise out of her shell. It may not be easy because she needs to learn how to deal with her empathic gift.

thanks for updating this soon... i come back every other to check for ur updates. smile n do a victory dance whenever i see u've updated

So happy to have seen this update today and really enjoyed reading it looking forward to see what happens next please update again real soon thanks!

How old is Louise and Nathan ?

Louise is in her twenties and Nathan is in his thirties

Just one thing...

Pittsburgh is "Pittsburgh," with an H on the end.

I only say this because I am a Pittsburgher...

Otherwise, this installment was wonderful, and I look forward to reading more.

~Caramel

I just love this new story line flowing from. Veronica and Vanessa; and Patrick. I love how this story is being written and I just know that this is going to be one heck of a story! Looking forward to read about Louise falling in love, but I would still like to read about all the other Sinclairs! Kalamazoo you rock lady! You can write! Can't wait for the next chapter! Anne133

I love it it's so interesting and well written. I can't wait to see what happens next with Nathan and Louise.

that your interracial storys were also non-human or Vamp Story's. That this story is of more Sinclaire's, who are they all? You got me w/this one. I didn't make the connection w/the Sinclair name until you mentioned it. I like this story. Louise is going to come out of her shell and shock everyone including Nathan. I look forward to watching her come to life!!!!

I agree with MizT. Each of your stories just pulls me in every update I want more

as always.. you never let me down

How much younger is Louise than Kevyn?? I know that Nathan is a vampire, so his age doesn't really matter, but I was wondering. I love reading Louise's perspective and how her and Nathan are getting closer.

Louise is about six years younger than Kevyn. Their parents had them at a young age

I'm hooked already!

This story just like Ethan's story has kept me intrigued from the first word in chapter 1 . Keep up the good work can't wait to read all the chapters!

I like this story. There is much less reference to rapes. Still too many grammatical errors. Just a nice romantical story.