by mojavejoe420
Great start. Poor Gayle though...he should be focusing on her.
only in the usa a story of a guy with 20 firearm is not unusual..
too bad the rest of us (non-us) will most likely parish :)
now to the point, nice writing and interesting story. waiting to read if his friends do arrive and if he decide to save anyone else the room is already limited.
Good story keep it up!
I am looking forward to see where this leads.
macho male with an 8 inch cock, great with guns, knows advanced first aid, you know, your typical badass. he might even sport a perma-stubble, a six-pack from going to a gym, and maybe not have body odor because. and the extreme boy scout readiness!
God bless 'murica! you fat liverspotted fuck.
That scene with Erin kind of killed it for me. It was like; "oh, I shouldn't be taking this story even the slightest bit seriously."
Fluff certainly has a place in erotic fiction, but if I'm reading it I'd rather just skip all the melodrama in between. Ya know, get right to the over-the-top gun/menstrual/crazy lady sex.