All Comments on 'Love, Sex, Revenge Pt. 02'

looks like someone may die in the next one

Kinda left the LW category Don’t you think? Pantyhose? Most guys hate pantyhose as they tend to be an impenetrable fortress. I would think they’d be a boner crusher, but I guess that’s what you’re going for. So, let me guess, he’s going to be dating Archer now? You have definitely left the reservation now.

This aircraft of a story was hit by a missile and right now is plunging down to the ground. I really doubt the crash will be survivable.

Only read as continued but think this is very odd of a man or woman to o cross. No offense to anyone who does just definitely not normal to me

I enjoyed

chapter 1, chapter 2 not so much. I hope chapter 3 will offset chapter 2.

Thank you.

This threw me because it was in a different category.

I didn't care for this one as much but I can see a train wreck coming so I'm waiting for the awful crash I can see on the way.

It is sexy to be completely dressed as a passable woman and go out.

It's hard to assimilate part 2 with part 1 . Here's hoping that is the last we see of jenny.

5*

The subject matter is not something I am into but the quality of the writing was much better. Did you get rid of the lousy editor from chapter 1. Only a few errors in this chapter. Thank you for your story.

Typically not my cup of tea, but the idea of developing Johnny's both male and female personae, given his childhood with 8 women and a macho father, is creative and worth pursuing.

I’m retired, reasonably well-off, and I’m currently dating a mature CD who knows what pantyhose does to me. She understands that she’s totally in control and I can tell she wants marriage. She likes to talk about it very directly…crossing and uncrossing her legs..

I love your writing. 5 stars for this one.

Loved it wish I had the guts to go out...AL

I really liked the first part, but this second part is not my thing at all, and I'm not giving it any stars. But I'm excited for the last part.