All Comments on 'Love Those Traffic Jams'

Jennifer,

i felt my body wanting to be one with yours throughout the story. I felt myself aching to be with you. Can i be David? omgaaaaaawd what i would'nt give to be inside your heart.

This was one of the most likeable pieces of erotica I've been fortunate to ever read. Your characters have a definite charm and realness to them. Keep up the good work at all costs. (:

Thank you Jennifer...I didn't know our encounter meant so much to you...."David".....lol

Wow! Wonderful! Soooooo hot. I liked the part with the two big black doggies.

Great Story...Great writing

Both story and traffic jam. I'll look at traffic jams from a new perspective from now on

Jenn, Here I am :) This is one fantastic and sexy story! For a while there I thought I was with you, beside you, between your thighs, and inside you :p I'll read the others in a bit :D Thank you! <kisses>

You have a true talent for turning what is undeniably great sex into beautiful passion. Not only have you once again allowed me enter the mind of a women experiencing erotic intimacy, but David has also given me a few pointers. Thank You.

Being a bit of a romantic myself, I enjoyed the journey through sensual erotisism portrayed with a light touch yet a naughty feel. <wink>

Thesandman

Jenn, that was an incredible story. It was so great, and I loved the way you started off describing that great Montreal summer. I love Montreal in the summer, its so romantic if you have just the right heat, and light at night. You made me feel like I was back there tonight, thanks a lot. It brought back a few memories of a wonderful girl that I was with. Great story, amazing passion, so spontaneous, very descriptive. You have a lot of talent for writing...I look forward to reading more of your work in the future, thanks a lot,

Craig

another great story... unfortunately the ratings only go to 5... great story and another erotic adventure...

I really related to David but have yet to meet someone as hot as Jemm. Keep writing Ms. Midnight, we love you!

You are such a fantastic writer. You built the erotocism up gradually, until it finally washed over me like a tidal wave. Keep writing!

You're going in my favorites <33 This one was so incredible. Your other stories are incredible, but this one is special. I love this so very much.

An excellent story Jennifer! A lot of people don't seem to understand the importance of conveying emotion - that is what separates erotica from porn. Not only does your story have that emotional element, but it feels natural and unforced. I will forevermore search out your stories.

Jennifer, wow, the emotion and personal touch made the story alive! The "inside" voice you had there was marvelously stimulating...well done dear lady!

Hi Jennifer

A couple of big jumps in the earlier paragraphs as you build the background. I think you could have spent more time developing or setting the scene for the erotic ecounter that ws to follow; especialy the dynamics with your former partner. Build more of the sexual tension. Also, take it more slowly back at the house, in the jaccuzzi and then into the bedroom. Feel the exploration of each other, linger over it and revel in the sensuous moments.

I did enjoy the story. very erotic. I look forward to reading the remainder.

And yes I did note the references to Montreal.

It certainly brought back memories. I was there in Easter 2002, it began to snow late that night, woke in the morning to a 1 metre snow dump! Very cold, especially as I had just come from the tail end of a warm New Zealand summer!

Ciao B

The realism in your mini story intensified the sex scenes so well ! Superb readable story.

I love the expert way you direct the pacing of this story. Expertly, you control the intensity through a range that incorporates a variety of emotional volcanos and physical triggers. Fantastic to see how skilled you are at taking us along an intense journey. This was an exceptionally easy story to get lost in, allowing the rhythms to take over.

Thank you!

I liked it soo much that it motivated me to sign up so I could leave a comment and favorite you. thanks :-)

This is about the hottest story I've read on this site. I'm late in saying so, but great work!

Absolutely loved this story, you are amazing..........

Incredibly sexy story, you're really talented.

Beautifully written, and extremely graphic and erotic. Keep on writing