All Comments on 'Lovely, Dark and Deep'

Lovely

Like the halo around the sun you spot on a chill January day.

What a wonderfully poignant story. No follow-up is necessary. Thank you! 5 🌟.

What a wonderful couple. I think I would like to get to know them better. But perhaps that is all we get is but a glimpse as they pass by. Only their creator the Author knows if more of their story is of interest or worth telling. Perhaps there are more interesting tales to share and entertain his fans.

Thanks for sharing those few moments of Rhianna and Aaron with us.

Cheers

SAGE

Wonderful story!

5

Nice story - leading to ????

***** stars

Burninglove

What a sweet sad story with promise of a hopeful future. I'd love a follow up that perhaps conjures another of Frost's poems. I'll leave it to the author to decide.

I feel cheated. This could have been such a great story of coincidence, condolence and a budding romance, but it was just too much to cram into one page. It takes time to heal from grief and this was just too rushed to be believable. This needs to be expanded to give them time to get past their pain and then get to know one another. The last part about "other things as well" was a bit presumptuous on his part. I guess he's suddenly over Kathy and his survivors guilt.

Touching tale with hope for the future as it ends. Nicely done.

Please continue this story.

Certainly would like to see it continue...

A moment out of time - a moment to savor. Life indeed is a series of happenings which change the direction you're going. The magic is in recognizing them when they're happening to you. 5*